Sunday, September 11, 2011
Six Sentence Sunday
This SSS is the second book in my enchantress series, Sorceress from the Sea. This book is about Alfwyn and sorceress he rescues from the sea, only a dark demonic warlord is tracking her and Alfwyn has to protect her and his land from the demon's plague.
The setup is Alfwyn is walking along the cliffs at the edge of the sea and he spots something adrift on the water:
It was a funeral barge, a custom among the people that dwelled at the edge of the sea. Poor soul. Alfwyn wondered briefly about the occupant, watching as the waves tossed the barge closer to the rocks. He couldn’t tear his eyes away as it jostled around like a feather in the wind until it crashed against a promontory of rocks,
splintering into numerous pieces. Then there was a bloodcurdling scream.
Dead men don’t scream.
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13 comments:
Ooo, nice! That last line was perfect. Now I have to know more. :)
Happy Six!
~Xakara
PsiCorps #3
I really like this set up. Suspenseful. Great six!
"Dead men don't scream" LOL! Love the suspense.
Love the last line. I want to read more.
Ooh, killer twist in that final line! Well done.
Oh, love the last line. Nice job!
Love the visual through his eyes and his comment at the end.
Great six! What a way to leave us hanging!!!
Amy Durham
Nice imagery. Love that last line.
Chilling last line. Great six!
Nice setup and great last line : )
Wow! Very nicely written... I want more!!
Awsome six!
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